Azucena tiene una sonrisa preciosa; cuando sonríe, se ilumina.

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Azucena tiene una sonrisa preciosa; cuando sonríe, se ilumina;
como una risilla irreprimida, simplemente ''tenía'' que salir!

Estaban sonríendo y teniendo un buen tiempo antes que la conocieran;
hasta la madre vieja quien le trataba como una niña tuvo que sonreir.

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Azucena has a beautiful smile; when she smiles, she lights up;
it were as if an irrepressible giggle simply ''had'' to emerge!

They were laughing and talking having a good time before they knew it;
even the old mother who made a point of treating her as a child smiled.

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ANY HELP WITH THE TRANSLATION AND/OR THE REFINEME4NT OF THESE PASSAGES
FROM OUR EXPERIMENTAL NOVELA "AZUENA" WILL BE GRATEFULLY APPRECIATED.

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updated JUL 18, 2010
posted by Martin-Rizzi

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Azucena tiene una sonrisa preciosa. Cuando sonríe se ilumina
con una risilla reprimida que simplemente tiene que surgir/brotar/salir.
Todos estaban divertidos y sonrientes antes de conocerla.
Hasta la vieja madre quien le trataba como a una niña tenía que sonreír.

updated MAY 30, 2009
posted by 00b83c38
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Azucena has a beautiful smile. When she smiles she is illumined
by an irrepressible smile that simply has to emerge.
They all used to laugh and have a good time before they knew her.
Even the old mother who treated her as a child smiled.

updated MAY 30, 2009
posted by 00b83c38
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Gracias, amigo!

updated MAY 30, 2009
posted by Martin-Rizzi