For starters, ¿Qué tal? is a question, and none of your questions have the leading question marks. The word que is mispelled, it requires
and accent when used in a question. You are using the wrong pronoun with gustar, you should say me gusta/gustan, not mi. You haven't conjugated some of your verbs, such as preferir and fascinar.
I would check for obvious misspellings, and other careless errors. This should get you started.