My songs and Poems. Please vote and comment on this. Thanx!

Question

ok. Here are some.
-Songs-
A miracle came

Today is the day, we gather together, while the children play, we all bow for prayer, in an empty room, where that angel came, when we start to sing a miracle came. He saved a soul, and let the blind see, he died on a cross, he used the golden key, to open the door, the door to, redemption.
A miracle came, up from the heavens, down to the earth where we lay, a miracle came, oh yes, that miracle came. Like a poor girl, sitting on the road, no cars passing by, just her and her soul, then there came that miracle that brought her up to the sky, that miracle never lied, that miracle is our God.
Today is the day, we gather together, while the children play, we all bow for prayer, in an empty room, where that angel came, when we start to sing a miracle came. He saved a soul, and let the blind see, he died on a cross, he used the golden key, to open the door, the door to, redemption.
3x (Men sing) He's our redeemer.
(Women sing) redeemer.
A miracle came

Answer 1

^^ VOTE N COMMENT PLEASE!

Answer 2

HI sweetie, I have shortened the post so that people can really enjoy this as it deserves to be enjoyed.

I think it shows a lot of feeling and you are simply awesome, dear Amber

Oh, and please post one song or poem in each thread. OK'

Answer 3

No problem. ^^

Answer 4

Hello, I like me your poem, thanks.

Answer 5

^^ VOTE N COMMENT PLEASE!

You wrote these yourself or are they are just favorites that you have collected?
If you are the author...¡Qué bien!

Answer 6

HI Quentin, Amber is an artist, the poem is hers and she should be famous, I mean, she WILL be when she is older

Answer 7

When the video room returns we all want you to perform a rendition

Answer 8

Awww thankies monkey. I will try. And yes Quentin. I wrote that song. ^^

Answer 9

xP I'm shy

Answer 10

Very nice. You're going to be big.

Answer 11

Hey thats awesome! I can almost hear someone singing it- very easy to listen to!!! Keep writing

Answer 12

Amber, you are back!!! did you see, Eddy and I got engaged!!

I hope you will write a poem for us

Answer 13

Amber that is soooo beautiful. I love to see young people spending their time on something so creative. Keep them coming. I love spiritual songs and poetry. Thanks.

Answer 14

That's a really nice song Amber! Love it! Show us some more!