Please proofread my work for mistakes in English

Question

All students whose are here had studied in the different levels of English language untill arrived at advanced 7, 8, and 9. In these levels we studied how to write an Essay, and we had studied every day, morning, afternoon, and night: paragraph Essay, Proccess Essays, Cause and Effect Essays, Comparison and Contrast Essays, and untill at last argumentative Essay. So, we think that is just that we do an Argumentative Essay. Although some people think that there are teachers shose students never would have wanted studied with them there are also some evidence that here in the IPNA, there are some theachers who qualify to be a great "teacher", and the IPNA can seay we are proud for we have one like you in our Instituion, and his students would be satisfied to have teacher like him.

Opponents of there are excellent teachers claim that it is difficult to find a teacher who meets the values that qualify to be one. However, we know one and I think that we had been fortunate to study with him, because he teached us how to develop the Essays, the grammar very hard untill we learn, he editing one or two times and using the board every day to explained us, he answered all the questions with worry that we learned, and he always had had much patience with us; besides, we wondering that in his home din't sleep thinking in how will be better the next class, Imagine huntil he doing a blog with us .

It should be evident that argument against the people think that generally there are not good teachers is not valid, because we know one of the best teachers. It is Mr. Luis Armando Espinoza who is here, and we are witnesses that he quality to be the best teacher of the IPNA, and this Institution should be proud of have him with them. So for this reason Paola going to give you a beatiful cart from us, and Eslim going to give a little present from us, and Diana will distribute a small share.

Thanks.

Answer 1

He tratado de comprender tus intenciones en revisar tu ensayo. Lo que sigue es mas sencillo que lo que has escrito... sencillo es bueno. Qué bueno tener un maestro como él.

Ya tengo que realizar mis preparaciones por la navidad. ¡Qué la tuya vaya bien!

All students here had studied English before arriving at the advanced levels – 7, 8 and 9. In these levels we studied how to write an essay, and we studied every morning, afternoon, and night. We studied the paragraph essay, the process essay, cause and effect essays, comparison and contrast essays, and, at last, the argumentative essay. Here in the IPNA, there are some teachers who qualify to be called “great”, and we can say we are proud to have as great a teacher as you. There are those who claim that it is difficult to find a teacher who meets the values that qualify one to be a great teacher. However, we do know one and we have been fortunate to study with him, because he has worked hard to teach us how to develop essays and understand grammar until we learned, with him editing one or two times and using the board every day to teach us, answering all our questions with care, and he always having much patience with us. We wonder whether in his home he ever slept, thinking about how to make his next class better! We imagine him doing a blog with us, and think that would be a great thing….