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Creo que una de las maneras de practicar Inglés es escribiendo textos acerca de diversos temas y en esta oportunidd he escrito este texto y quisiera que me corrijan los errores que pude haber cometido.Muchas gracias por su ayuda. My friend David was born in Amazonas on July 26th,1992 He got to enter at the university last year ,He studies Chemical Engeeniering.He have only studied English a year ,he doesn´t like studying English much. In his free time he usually goes to the cinema once a week,he went to the cinema last Sunday and he told me that enjoyed watching a nice science_fiction film . He normally watches that sort of films when he goes there.He also like doing sport and watching sport on TV .When his classes finish at the univeristy every year,he goes on holiday to visit his parents who live in amazonas.He is going on holiday there at christamas and go back in March.

Answer 1

Pretty good, I just made a few small changes. I don't know if you are learning British or American English, but I am American, so that might explain some of what I saw as vocabulary errors. Good job and let me know if you have any questions about what I changed!

My friend David was born in Amazonas on July 26th,1992. He entered the university last year ,He studies Chemical Engeeniering. He has only studied English a year , but he doesn´t like studying English much. In his free time he usually goes to the movies once a week, he went to the movies last Sunday and he told me that he enjoyed watching a nice science_fiction film . He normally watches those sorts of movies when he goes there.He also likes playing sports and watching sports on TV .When his classes finish at the univeristy every year,he goes on vacation to visit his parents who live in amazonas.He is going on vacation there at Christmas and will return in March.

Answer 2

My friend David was born in Amazonas on July 26th, 1992. He got accepted into a new (or) entered a new university last year. He studies Chemical Engineering. He has only studied English for a year, he doesn't like studying English that well. In his free time he usually goes to the cinema once a week, he went to the cinema last Sunday and he told me that he enjoyed watching a nice science-fiction film. He normally watches those sorts of films, when he goes there. He also likes to play sports and watch sports on TV. When his classes are finished at the university at the end of every year, he goes on holidays to visit his parents who live in Amazonas. He is going there for Christmas this year and will return to here in March.

¡Buen trabajo! We normally say "movies" instead of cinemas, or films in American English, we also use "movie theatre" to refer to a cinema. I know that a lot of people who are trying to learn American English online don't realize when they are learning British English, instead. However, I don't know which you are learning. You have wrote the writing above very well though, there were only a few mistakes.

¡Buena suerte!