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Is it Ok?

Is technology like computer hadn't helped me, I wouldn't have succeeded in my English studies. Besides, If I didn't have technology in my live, I would be bored.

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  • Posted Jun 23, 2011
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Not bad! A couple of wee corrections:

If technology like computers ....in my life

  • thanks Luzbonita, and maybe "If technology like my computer?" - maylegoas Jun 23, 2011 flag
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It is better to refer to "computers" in general rather than "my computer" specifically because that makes it sound like your computer and your computer alone contains some new technology. Hope that helps : - )

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