Best Spanish Josh Groban Song

Question

I heard this song and it inspired me to reapply myself to my Spanish (which I can now that I'm taking a lighter school load for the summer).

Si Volvieras a Mi

Lyrics: http://bit.ly/klg2xH

Music: http://bit.ly/jzJd87 (Ignore the video!)

Flashcards: http://bit.ly/kpW2Mo (I made them)

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Now here's my translation, please correct me. It's long so this is Part I:

Como sobrevivir?

como calmar mi sed?

como seguir sin ti?

como saltar sin red?

How to survive?

How to calm my thirst?

How to continue without you?

How to jump without a net?

Con ese adios tan salvaje y cruel

me deshojaste la piel

la eternidad en final se quedo

y un desierto es ...mi corazon...

With this farewell, so savage and cruel

You’re skinning me alive

Only eternity is left

A desert is… my heart…

Ay si volvieras a mi

encenderia el sol mil primaveras

si regresaras por mi

seria un milagro cada beso que me dieras

pero hoy te vas

y no hay vuelta atras.

If you would return to me

The sun would light one thousand springs

If you will return to me

It will be a miracle, each kiss that you give me

But today you’re leaving

And there’s no way back

Answer 1

It's beautiful, like a poem