"Poco a poco Jaime y Alba se han hecho amigos"

Question

Please help to proof read my Spanish version, thanks

Poco a poco Jaime y Alba se han hecho amigos. Cuando Alba se siente confundida sobre la vender de camping, Jaime conforta y ayuda para resolver el problema. Además, cuanto Alba se ha raptado, Jaime está un poco deprimido y hace mucho esfuerzo en encontrar a Alba. Todas las personas sienten Jaime gusta mucho Alba, especialmente Fernando que anima Jaime a ir a encontrar Abla continuamente.

English version:

Gradually Jaime and Alba have become friends. When Alba is confused about the sale of camping, Jaime comfort and help her to solve the problem. In addition when Alba has been kidnapped, Jaime is a little depressed and makes a lot of effort in finding Alba. Everyone feels Jaime loves Alba, especially Fernando who encourages Jaime to go to find Alba continuously.

Answer 1

Hi. I corrected some of the punctuation and grammatical errors in your English version.

Gradually(comma), Jaime and Alba have become friends. When Alba is confused about the sale of camping (no comma) Jaime comfortS and helpS her to solve the problem. In addition(comma) when Alba has been kidnapped,(no comma) Jaime is a little depressed and makes a lot of effort in finding Alba. Everyone feels Jaime loves Alba, especially Fernando(comma) who continuously encourages Jaime to go to find Alba.

Why the "sale of camping" what does that mean?

Answer 2

Poco a poco Jaime y Alba se han hecho amigos íntimos. Cuando Alba se siente confundida sobre la venta de equipo de camping, Jaime conforta a ella y le ayuda a resolver el problema. Además, cuando Alba ha sido raptada, Jaime está un poco deprimido y hace mucho esfuerzo en encontrar a Alba. Todas las personas sienten que a Jaime le gusta mucho Alba, especialmente Fernando que continuamente le anima a Jaime a buscar a Abla.

Not a native, suggest that you wait for one.

• Jeje...I just now understood...the author must have meant to say "camping equipment." - --Mariana-- Apr 23, 2011