La lectura hablar la vacaciones a españa de Jaime y sus amigos

Question

is there any grammatical mistake, thanks

La lectura hablar la vacaciones a españa de Jaime y sus amigos, se llaman Martha, Eduardo y Uwe. Ellos van el camping Mediterraneo en Benisol de España. Ellos son nurvos clientes de éste campling. Normalmente, la grande familia Martinez vienen a disfrutar sus vacaciones todos los veranos. Les gusta el campling pero no satisfacen con el director esta vez. Porque el señor Martínez es enfadado con el acomodo de la plaza. Una plaza reservada se ha hecho pero no está plazas libres que la familia Martinez ha llegado.

Answer 1

I would suggest that you include your English intention as there are a few confusing mistakes in your narration.

For instance....la grande familia... When gran/grande precedes the noun it means grand (illustrious). When it follows the noun it means large. Not quite sure which you intended to say.

Ellos son nuevos clientes de éste campling. [camping]

éste is a pronoun, not an adjective. However, a pronoun could work there without the camping. Not sure what you meant in English.

Actually, I don't know if you have enough points to edit. If not, just post your English version in a reply.

Answer 2

Here is the english version

La lectura hablar la vacaciones a españa de Jaime y sus amigos, se llaman Martha, Eduardo y Uwe. Ellos van el camping Mediterraneo en Benisol de España. Ellos son nurvos clientes de éste campling. Normalmente, la grande familia Martinez vienen a disfrutar sus vacaciones todos los veranos. Les gusta el campling pero no satisfacen con el director esta vez. Porque el señor Martínez es enfadado con el acomodo de la plaza. Una plaza reservada se ha hecho pero no está plazas libres que la familia Martinez ha llegado.

The reading talks about Jaime and his friends' holiday in Spain. They called Martha, Eduardo and Uwe. They go to Campling Mediterraneo which is in Benisol of Spain. They are the new customers of this campling. Normally, there is a big family Martinez go to enjoy their holiday every summer. They like the campling but they sometimes don't satisfy with the director. (i want to say the bad tamper of the director) Because Mr. Martinez angry with the arrangement of the room. The reservation of room has been made but there is no free room available when the family arrived.

Answer 3

La lectura trata de las vacaciones a España de Jaime y sus amigos. Se llaman...

Ellos van a Campling Mediterraneo en Benisol, España [ o que está ubicado en Benisol, España]

Are you saying camping or is the name of the place Campling? You switch back and forth with the spelling of the word. If it is camping, then ...Van de acampada or van de camping.

I'm sorry. I made the assumption that you were a native English speaker when I suggested that you provide your English intention. Now I see that may not be true. Could you fill out your profile pages providing your native tongue as well as your levels of proficiency in both Spanish and English. Your English version needs some correcting too, so it may be of little use in providing insight into your Spanish version. It would be helpful to know which is your strongest language. Perhaps, we should be answering you in Spanish rather than English.

Answer 4

I'm sorry for making you confuse, "camping" is correct, I'm not a native English speaker, but asking me in English is okay. My first language is Chinese.

Answer 5

Oh, I see. This is not tent camping, but staying in cabins (rooms?) at a campground.

The reading talks about Jaime and his friends' holiday in Spain. His friends are named Martha, Eduardo and Uwe. They are going to Camp Mediterraneo which is in Benisol, Spain. They are the new customers of this camping.

I would suggest: This is their first visit to this particular campground.

Normally, this is how the large Martinez family enjoys their holiday every summer. They liked the campground, but sometimes they weren't satisfied with the ill- tempered director. Mr. Martinez was dissatisfied with the lodging arrangements. The room had been made reserved, but the room was not available when the family arrived.

I'm curious as to whether they were staying in cabins or a lodge. As you mention room I am thinking that they stayed at a lodge.

If my version is anywhere close to what you meant, then I can help you say it in Spanish. Feel free to alter anything that I misunderstood.

By the way, we have some members that speak some dialects of Chinese. Maybe one of them will jump in and help you.

Answer 6

yes, should be cabins. Your version is exactly what i meant. Thank you very much, you are teaching me both english and spanish.

oh really? I haven´t met any Chinese here.

• I''m not sure that they are Chinese, but they can speak or at least write it. I have seen them write some messages back and forth. One member that I am thinking of has moved on, but I seem to recall that Lazarus knows something of the language. - qfreed Feb 8, 2011
• If I remember correctly he mentioned once that his wife is Chinese. PM him and ask. - qfreed Feb 8, 2011
• But talking to native English specker like you can improve my English. - joeshawn Feb 8, 2011
• So I haven´t tried to search for Chinese member - joeshawn Feb 8, 2011

Answer 7

Too bad. I just went to the User's page and checked the search engine. You used to be able to search members by the country that they are from. I was curious as to how many Chinese members that we have. They seem to have disabled that search parameter, however. Probably for privacy reasons.

Answer 8

Hi joe, if you are interested, I can indicate some members to you from your country

Answer 9

El camping Mediterráneo

La lectura trata de las vacaciones en España de Jaime y sus amigos, Martha, Eduardo y Uwe. Fueron de acampada al camping Mediterráneo ubicado en Benisol, España. Ésta fue su primera visita a este campamento en particular. Habitualmente, esto es cómo la famila Martinez grande se diviertía todos los veranos. Les gustaron el campamento, pero a veces no fueron satisfechos con el director malhumorado. El señor Martinez no fue satisfecho con los preparativos de alojamento. La habitación hubo sido reservada, pero no fue disponible al llegado de la familia.

Not a native. Do not accept these recommendations without further suggestions. I just wanted to practice. Wait for someone who knows what they are doing.

• do not pay any attention to his ramblings, his Spanish is near to perfect, jeje, he knows it too,and we certainly know that here , even though he does not wish to talk to talk to us...but I am not giving up hope:P ::.sigh::: - Heidita Feb 8, 2011
• yes, - joeshawn Feb 9, 2011
• and thanks qfreed - joeshawn Feb 9, 2011

Answer 10

La lectura trata de las vacaciones en España de Jaime y sus amigos, Martha, Eduardo y Uwe. Fueron de acampada al camping Mediterráneo ubicado en Benisol, España. Esta fue su primera visita a este campamento en particular. Habitualmente, esto es cómo la famila Martinez grande se diviertía todos los veranos. Les gustaba el campamento, pero a veces no estaban satisfechos con el director malhumorado. El señor Martinez no estaba satisfecho con los preparativos de alojamento. La habitación fue reservada, pero no estaba disponible a la llegada de la familia.

Quentin, the accent on esto y esta etc not necessary. Not a mistake.

• Well, if there had been on on esto it would have been. And the ser/estar. I changed them two or three times. Couldn't make up my mind. - qfreed Feb 8, 2011