9 Vote

I was very encouraged with the responses to the last thread. If you, as a non-native English speaker, have anything specific you would like me to post just PM me and I will get the suggestions into the thread. smile Check over the sentences and correct the ones that need to be corrected. Good luck and have fun. wink I will post the correct answers on Friday, December 31, 2010 This should give everybody enough time to post their answers.
Ground Rules:
First, this is for non-native English speakers and you will have to post your answer in English. Second, there is no "dumb" answer and all answers will be respected and if need be, corrected in a gentle manner by yours truly (or of course any admin that stops by to look). Third, have fun!!
Sentences to correct:
1. the dog has fir that is falling off because of flees.
2. The fisherman bated the hook and through his fishing lion into the lake.
3. The woman displayed an amazing feet of strenth.
4. This will be are last sail too nite.
5. The bare could not bear it anymore.

  • ¡Buen ejercicio, Profesor! - --Mariana-- Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • :) ¡Gracias mi novia! :) - Jason7R Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • Mmm this seems a little bit hard this time .... maybe I should wait for someone to be the First :roll: - lovely_lovel Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • Very encouraged :) With a d ) lol - FELIZ77 Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • Very good exercise! Voting :) I am sure that non-natives will enjoy doing this and be challenged :) - FELIZ77 Dec 29, 2010 flag

9 Answers

4 Vote

My attempt is very similar to Lovely's one. Thanks, Jason!

  1. The dog has fur that is falling off because of fleas.
  2. The fisherman bated the hook and threw his fishing line into the lake.
  3. The woman displayed an amazing feat of strength.
  4. This will be our last sail tonight.
  5. The bear could not bear it anymore.

  • Muy bien cogu..bravo! - sv2qp Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • I want you to look at #2 (bated) but other than that....W O W!! Not bad chica - Jason7R Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • #4 Laura is not quite right. - ian-hill Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • There was a tie so I went with a new winner. :) Great job Laura. - Jason7R Jan 1, 2011 flag
4 Vote

Sentences to correct: 1. the dog has fir that is falling off because of flees. 2. The fisherman bated the hook and through his fishing lion into the lake. 3. The woman displayed an amazing feet of strenth. 4. This will be are last sail too nite. 5. The bare could not bear it anymore.

Sentences corrected: 1. the dog has fur that is falling off because of flees. 2. The fisherman bated the hook and threw his fishing line into the lake. 3. The woman displayed an amazing fist of strenth. 4. This will be are last sail tonight. 5. The bear could not bear it anymore.

  • Don't forget about capitalization sv2qp. :) You are getting closer. - Jason7R Dec 29, 2010 flag
4 Vote
  1. The dog has fur that is falling off because of the fleas.
  2. The fisher baited the hook and threw his fishing line into the lake.
  3. The woman displayed an amazing feat of strength.
  4. This will be our last sail tonight.
  5. The bear could not bear it anymore.

I hope I did well rolleyes

Thank a lot for the exercise, Jason smile

  • My pleasure Lovely. Not too shabby :) I will have to make it a little tougher for you. ;) - Jason7R Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • Lovely, look at #2 (bated) - Jason7R Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • Lovely - have another look at #4 - ian-hill Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • Well the only thing I can think about for now is changing it into **baited** ... I'm still trying to figure out the error in the 4th sentence thanks Ian :) - lovely_lovel Dec 29, 2010 flag
2 Vote

I think in the first sentence we have "fur" not "fir" and the fur is falling off becase off fleas. the second" baited a hook and threw his fishing line into the lake

  • sorry" becase of" - xentuk Dec 29, 2010 flag
  • No worries, you can change it now that you can edit...."because". :) Thanks for posting and remember to rewrite the sentences completely. :) - Jason7R Dec 29, 2010 flag
2 Vote

then we have "feet of strength" in the third, 4 is a bit difficult. suppose" the last sale tonight" 5. the bear couldn't bear it anymore???

  • Now with all the information you have given, rewrite all of the sentences into one post and you'll have it!! :) Thanks again for posting. :) - Jason7R Dec 29, 2010 flag
1 Vote

Lovely, the short and sweet of it is: a homophone is one of two or more words which sound the same but have different meanings.
Homographs are words that are spelled the same, but have different meanings and may have different pronunciations.
Homonyms are groups of words that share the same spelling and the same pronunciation but have different meanings.
I hope this helps everybody including me!! wink

1 Vote
  1. the dog has fir that is falling off because of flees.
  2. The fisherman bated the hook and through his fishing lion into the lake.
  3. The woman displayed an amazing feet of strenth.
  4. This will be are last sail too nite.
  5. The bare could not bear it anymore.

  • The dog has fur that is falling off because of fleas.
  • The fisherman bated the hook and threw his fishing line into the lake.
  • The woman displayed an amazing fit of strength.
  • This will be our last sale tonight.
  • The bar could not bear it anymore.

  • The dog has fur that is falling off because of fleas.
  • The fisherman baited the hook and threw his fishing line into the lake.
  • The woman displayed an amazing feat of strength.
  • This will be our last sale tonight.
  • The bear could not bear it anymore.
  • :) #2, 3, and 5 have one error more in them. Great job getting #4!! - Jason7R Dec 30, 2010 flag
1 Vote
  1. The dog has fur that is falling off because of the fleas.
  2. The fisherman baited the hook and threw his fishing line into the lake.
  3. The woman displayed an amazing feat of strength.
  4. This will be our last sale tonight.
  5. The bear could not bear it anymore.
  • #1 needs a little more TLC. Great job though. - Jason7R Dec 30, 2010 flag
  • Thanks, I fixed it. - Agora Jan 3, 2011 flag
1 Vote

Great job to everybody that gave it a shot!! I will post again before I leave for work!! Y E S, I'm taking tomorrow off and my family and I are going bowling tonight!! No, I'm not that good at bowling so it should make for a hilarious evening!! wink
Here are the corrections for the sentences:
Corrections:
1. The dog has fur that is falling off because of fleas.
2. The fisherman baited the hook and threw his fishing line into the lake.
3. The woman displayed an amazing feat of strength.
4. This will be our last sale.
5. The bear could not bear it anymore.

  • HaPpY new year Jason :)) and have a great evening! - lovely_lovel Dec 31, 2010 flag
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