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Hi guys, I'm back with a question after being away quite long from Spanishdict. I was trying to translate this song from Spanish to English but I want to know what is the best translation I can have out of it

Here it is, copied from a web of lyrics so don't bother correcting the Spanish mistakes hehe

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Se que faltaron razones

Se que sobraron motivos

Contigo porque me matas

Y ahora sin tí ya no vivo…

Tú dices blanco yo digo negro

Tú dices voy yo digo vengo

Miro la vida en color y tu en blanco y negro…

Dicen que el amor es suficiente

pero no tengo el valor de hacerle frente

Tu eres quien me hace llorar

pero solo tu me puedes consolar.

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Te regalo mi amor te regalo mi vida

A pesar del dolor eres tu quien me inspira

No somos perfectos solo polos opuestos

Te amo con fuerza te odio a momentos…

Te regalo mi amor te regalo mi vida

Te regalaré el sol siempre que me lo pidas

No somos perfectos solo polos opuestos

Mientras sea junto a ti siempre lo intentaría

Y que no daría?

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Me odias, me quieres siempre contracorriente…

Te llevo en mi mente desesperadamente

por mas que te busco

Eres tu quien me encuentra…

Dicen que el amor es suficiente

pero no tengo el valor de hacerle frente

Tu eres quien me hace llorar

pero solo tu me puedes consolar.

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Te regalo mi amor te regalo mi vida

A pesar del dolor eres tu quien me inspira

No somos perfectos solo polos opuestos

Te amo con fuerza Te odio a momentos…

Te regalo mi amor te regalo mi vida

Te regalo el sol siempre que me lo pidas

No somos perfectos solo polos opuestos

Mientras sea junto a ti siempre lo intentaría

Y que no daría?

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Si eres mi mundo

si con tus manos curas mis heridas que no daría

Si solo a tu lado puedo llorar

y reír al sentir tus caricias…

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Te regalo mi amor te regalo mi vida

A pesar del dolor eres tu quien me inspira

No somos perfectos solo polos opuestos

Te amo con fuerza Te odio a momentos…

Te regalo mi amor te regalo mi vida

Te regalaré el sol siempre que me lo pidas

No somos perfectos solo polos opuestos

Mientras sea junto a ti siempre lo intentaría

Y que no daría?

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Now here my attempt

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I know there was a lack of reasons

I know there was too many reasons (also? can't thought about more synonims)

With you because you kill me

And now without you I can't live anymore...

You say white I say black

You say "I go" I say "I come back"

I see the life in colours and you do it in black and white...

They say that love is enough

but I don't the courage to stand up against it

You are the one who makes me cry

But you are the only one who can solace me.

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I give you my love, I give you my life

Even thought it hurts it's you who inspires me

We are not perfect just opposite poles

I love you stronghly I hate you sometimes

I give you my love, I give you my life

I will give you the sun whenever you ask me

We are not perfect just opposite poles

If(while) it is next to you I would always try it

And what wouldn't I give? (can't think about something more accurate)

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You hate me you love me always backset...

I carry you in my mind desperately

Even thought I seek for you

It's always you who finds me...

Repeat chorus

If you are my world

If with your hands you cure my wounds, what wouldn't I give?

If only next to you I can cry

and laugh when I feel your touch...

Repeat

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All corrections, improvements are welcome. Thanks in advance guys!!

Answer 1

That's long, so I'll just take a crack at a little bit:

but I don't the courage to stand up against it

You are the one who makes me cry

But you are the only one who can solace me.

but I don't have the courage to face up to it.
You are the one who makes me cry
But only you can comfort me.