Queda prohibido llorar sin aprender..... | SpanishDict Answers
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Queda prohibido llorar sin aprender, Levantarte un dia sin saber que hacer, Tener miedo a tus recuerdos.

Queda prohibido no sonreir a los problemas, no luchar por lo que quieres, Abandonarlo todo por miedo, No convertir en realidad tus suenios,…

Queda prohibido no intentar comprender a las personas, pensar que sus vidas valen menos que la tuya, no saber que cada uno tiene su camino y su dicha…

Queda prohibido no crear tu historia, No tener un momento para la gente que te necesita, No comprender que lo que la vida te da, tambien te lo quita…

Queda prohibido, no buscar tu felicidad no vivir tu vida con una actitud positiva, no pensar en que podemos ser mejores, no sentir que sin ti, este mundo no seria igual…

Translation (not literal): It is prohibited to weep without learning from it, To rise up in the morning without knowing what to do, To fear your memories.

It is prohibited to frown at your problems, to not fight for what you want, to abandon everything to fear, to not convert your dreams into reality...

It is prohibited to not attempt to understand people, to think that their lives have less value than yours, to not know that each has his road and his happiness...

It is prohibited to not create your story, to not set aside a moment for people who need you, to not comprehend that that which life gives you, life also takes away...

It is prohibited to not search for your happiness, to live your life without a positive attitude, to not think that we can be better, to not feel that without you, the world would not be the same...

  • muy bonito, getting my vote - 00494d19 Nov 15, 2009 flag
  • Thanks, hehe! (¡Gracias, jiji!) - Malenor Nov 15, 2009 flag

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Was this an original poem from you? It's good. Definitely getting a vote from me. smile

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¡Qué hermosa es el poema, Malenor! smile He aquí unas pequeñas correcciones. (Just typos, I'm sure! wink)

... Levantarte un día sin saber qué hacer, ...

Queda prohibido no sonreír a los problemas, ... No convertir en realidad tus sueños,…

... pensar que sus vidas valen menos de la tuya, ...

... No comprender que lo que la vida te da, también te lo quita…

... este mundo no sería igual…

By the way, have you titled your poem?

If you have more, keep 'em coming! grin

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