Can someone proofread, please? El verano pasado, fui a Virginia con mi familia ....
I am in Spanish 102 and for my next test, I have been instructed to write a brief paragraph on something I did last summer. I just learned the preterit/past tense and have not learned the imperfect or subjunctive yet. I would appreciate any feedback/suggestions.
Thanks!!
El verano pasado, fui a Virginia con mi familia y mi novio por una semana. En Virginia, jugué el básquetbol con mis hermanos, también jugué el vólibol y nadé en la piscina. Algunos noches comimos en restaurantes, y en las mañanas mi madre, cuñada, y yo hicimos el desayuno. Tuvimos unas maravillosas vacaciones.
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El verano pasado, fui a Virginia con mi familia y mi novio por una semana.
Algunas noches comíamos en restaurantes
voleibol
, y yo hacíamos el desayuno.
Change it to "algunas noches" Sorry I think I need new glasses.
Hi I think your essay is good and brief but the word "noche" is feminine so its algunas noches. And it seems that the imperfect tense ought to be used in that same sentence because it was a habitual action so instead of "hicimos" I think it would be "hacíamos"
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