Azucena ha seguido su corazón, ella está sola en una célda; corrections? improvements? either language
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Azucena ha seguido su corazón, ella está sola en una célda; ella ha seguido el movimiento de sentimiento hacia su Arturo.
Azucena has followed her heart, she is alone in a bare cell; she has followed the movement of sentiment towards her Arturo.
Para demostrar la profundidad de su amor por él, ella robo al bebé, ella tiró todo de lado por él.
To demonstrate the depth of her love for him, she stole the baby, she threw everything away for him.
Su audaz hecho la forza adentro del corazón de su amado; éso es lo que ella imagina: que ella ha comprobado su amor.
Her audacious act forces her into her loved one’s heart; that is what she imagines: that she has proven her love.
Sólo su único amor, el amor del que sólo ella es capaz; podría regresarle a su arrogante montador ojos de estrellas.
Only her unique love, the love of which only she is capable can win back her cocky, starry-eyed bull rider.
Ahora, ella esta fuera de la caja en paseo salvaje; Echando su vida en la mesa ríesgo jugándose el todo.
Now, she was out the chute on a wild ride herself; throwing her life on the table with total abandon.
1 Answer
I think you are over using accents. you don't need to accentuate celda, el and eso. Another suggestion, although montador is the correct translation for rider, that word is never used in common speaking you should probably use jinete instead.
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